twilit-wanderer.livejournal.com ([identity profile] twilit-wanderer.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wyntir_knight 2008-05-06 04:39 am (UTC)

I don't have much to add to what everyone else has said, but I quite liked this. It's always fun to see how other people handle other characters having bad days, and the whole premise of it - Ratchet and Smokescreen continually needing to turn down promotions and so never getting much recognition, along with the resulting commiserating - was a neat way to go about it. (And I think Ratchet definitely needs to teach Smokey the finer points of spanner-tossing.)

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