Prowl's behavior in almost all of the Prowl/Jazz stories is... yeah. I can understand he could be hard to write (I had/still have hundreds of problems with the one story of mine he's in), but some of the things I've read really annoy me because of how OOC they seem. (I hate to complain too much , because I really don't want to rain on anyone's parade, but on occasion it feels as if people are writing stories with the characters' actions based solely off how others have written them, and that the whole thing has just snowballed.)
That is the real question, isn't it? heh.
Whoops, sorry. Probably poor wording on my part, there. No, actually, I really like how you're written them, both by themselves and when they're interacting with each other. Something's off. It might just be my brain. Keep trying!
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Date: 14 Jan 2008 19:41 (UTC)That is the real question, isn't it? heh.
Whoops, sorry. Probably poor wording on my part, there. No, actually, I really like how you're written them, both by themselves and when they're interacting with each other. Something's off. It might just be my brain. Keep trying!