[fic] Patience
14 February 2010 23:25Title: Patience
Author: Wyntir_Knight
Rating: G
Series: G1
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Bluestreak
Summary: Bluestreak waits for the perfect shot.
Warnings: None
Author's Note: I'm trying my hands at writing drabbles. I've come to the conclusion, that while long fics are fantastic, drabbles are far harder to write. After all, you're trying to get a whole concept down to as few words as possible.
Technically, this isn't a true drabble. I believe it comes in as about 150 words, rather than the required 100, but I think I presented the scene well.
Any comments would be appreciated.
Disclaimer: Transformers belong to Hasbro and Takara, and are licensed to IDW and Dreamworks. My original characters are my own and any similarity between them and any existing characters from canon or fandom is purely coincidental. I claim no ownership by writing this work.
I lie on my belly, looking out over the battlefield below me. I'm surrounded by the filth and debris of this burned out apartment but I take no notice of it. For me, all there is is this moment. My fuelpump and intakes work in a slow and steady rhythm; I am calm, at one with my rifle. I will offline a Decepticon today.
I am silence. No chatter, no busywork. The other Autobots seem amazed that I'm a sniper, but here I don't need to hold the past back with constant noise. Here I don't need to worry that the shadows are going to remind me of an old horror. Here I can focus on now. There is no past. There is no future. There is only now. And me. And my gun. And Devastator turning to look at my nest. I will offline a Decepticon today. .... Just maybe not this one ....
Author: Wyntir_Knight
Rating: G
Series: G1
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Bluestreak
Summary: Bluestreak waits for the perfect shot.
Warnings: None
Author's Note: I'm trying my hands at writing drabbles. I've come to the conclusion, that while long fics are fantastic, drabbles are far harder to write. After all, you're trying to get a whole concept down to as few words as possible.
Technically, this isn't a true drabble. I believe it comes in as about 150 words, rather than the required 100, but I think I presented the scene well.
Any comments would be appreciated.
Disclaimer: Transformers belong to Hasbro and Takara, and are licensed to IDW and Dreamworks. My original characters are my own and any similarity between them and any existing characters from canon or fandom is purely coincidental. I claim no ownership by writing this work.
I lie on my belly, looking out over the battlefield below me. I'm surrounded by the filth and debris of this burned out apartment but I take no notice of it. For me, all there is is this moment. My fuelpump and intakes work in a slow and steady rhythm; I am calm, at one with my rifle. I will offline a Decepticon today.
I am silence. No chatter, no busywork. The other Autobots seem amazed that I'm a sniper, but here I don't need to hold the past back with constant noise. Here I don't need to worry that the shadows are going to remind me of an old horror. Here I can focus on now. There is no past. There is no future. There is only now. And me. And my gun. And Devastator turning to look at my nest. I will offline a Decepticon today. .... Just maybe not this one ....