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Well this baby seems to be done. I'm not entirely sure about the make up sex, so any thoughts or criticism would be appreciated.

Tell me what you think!

For those who are interested, here are Parts One, Two, and Three.

And without further ado, here's the end of Thunder Crashes )
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Well, apparently this story has taken on a life of it's own and, the fight continues. I think that there may be one or two more chapters in this baby before it's done.

As with the other chapters, any comments and criticism would be greatly appreciated. As with Jazz int he last chapter, I'm not entirely sure if the voice or the tone is quite right. I want to show Ratchet's side of it, but there's a part of me that is worried that he might be coming across as patullant. I don't know -- my present state of mind doesn't lend itself to long term fights. So, as I said, any comments you might have would be very, very, very much appreciated.

Thunder Crashes - Part 3 )
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Here is the second part of Thunder Crashes, and to tell you the truth, I'm not sure if I've gotten Jazz's "voice" right. Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated.

Thunder Crashes, Part 2 )
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After I posted Lovers in Dangerous Times over at [livejournal.com profile] transficsation, [livejournal.com profile] lstarrunner requested that I write a fic where Telephone, led to Thunder/Lightning and then to some of the "sexy" ones.

Here is the first part at my attempt to do that. As a bit of background, this fic assumes that Swoop is training to be a field medic. I can't recall where I first read that, but it wasn't my idea.

And without further ado, here is Thunder Crashes, Part 1: )

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