I'm back ... sort of

Well, today is my last day in Aruba. It's been nice and relaxing ... kind of.

I've purchased an internet card so that I can check on our flight, I figured I should check on my accounts while I'm at it.

( Aruba )

Thunder Crashes - Part 3

Well, apparently this story has taken on a life of it's own and, the fight continues. I think that there may be one or two more chapters in this baby before it's done.

As with the other chapters, any comments and criticism would be greatly appreciated. As with Jazz int he last chapter, I'm not entirely sure if the voice or the tone is quite right. I want to show Ratchet's side of it, but there's a part of me that is worried that he might be coming across as patullant. I don't know -- my present state of mind doesn't lend itself to long term fights. So, as I said, any comments you might have would be very, very, very much appreciated.

( Thunder Crashes - Part 3 )